. . . and
For those dreams
Which were had there
Which are none too dissimilar
From those dreams
Which were had here
,
Those dreams
That remain into the summer
After the spring
Which birthed them
,
Those dreams
Are d(r)ying In the sun
.
Deferred
.
Beautiful piece…
~~~~~Felicia
Wonderful!
Love this!
dreams are confusing but then seldom dreams are fun
got a couple really interesting things going on this one. like the line break just for the comma, first stanza is a profound opening, and you pulled it off with simple language, good write.
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Today is a day for drea,ms.
Bettye
Love the image of the dreams remaining into the summer…wonderful. Be well~