there was no call

nor letter

with ‘dear’ entwined

in the rocket

of tone




5 thoughts on “Distilled!

  1. Really powerful punctuation – literally and figuratively! It feels like the punctuation represents the thought process/flow of the poem visually, it made me wonder if different people think with different amounts and types of punctuation in their minds

    • Thank you. I wonder about punctuation also. My work is supposed to try to follow realthought as opposed to realspeak. I’m really into trying to capture thought processes in my work. Thanks again for reading and commenting.

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