Distilled!


A Portrait or Maybe A Still-Life

the license read BL

because GR

would mean ‘green’

but they were grey

and that is

how they behaved

(A Bit of A Revision -for clarity at the risk of ruining rhythm)

the driver’s license read BL

but they were grey

and that’s how they behaved.

but GR means green

as far as eyes are concerned

in New York State

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6 thoughts on “Distilled!

  1. I guess I go for the “if it’s obscure enough that you have to figure it out, it’s good poetry” route – I like it without the clarification! 🙂

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