when a cyborg day
begins its reign
compromise for spotlight
will give nightingales
room
let petal split
from stamen
nectar
release
then circuits
will see to it
scheduled
flesh an artifact
of beauty
might remain
as the brutal renderings
are sent away
thus replaced
with impartial
vision
December 31st, 2012 at 4:54 pm
Oooh scary, but so true when you think of The Terminator… and our future…
December 31st, 2012 at 7:29 pm
a beauty!
January 3rd, 2013 at 7:37 pm
I love this. (Especially the title / last few lines).
January 3rd, 2013 at 7:41 pm
Thank you. The ending of my poems are usually my favorite part. I linger over my last words/lines. I always want to feel like I’ve given the reader something to read towards.
January 3rd, 2013 at 7:44 pm
I like that – it creates a natural flow … an objective.
January 8th, 2013 at 3:47 pm
what we see is effected by who have seen it before us
March 12th, 2013 at 6:29 pm
Five star ✭✭✭✭✭ click to you for “Impartial Vision”…